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10/5/2007

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Posted by BJ
I came upon the following two ‘speed bumps’ in proposals recently. They literally stopped me in my tracks (reading wise).

“…the price of this is priceless.”

“…the diameter of which is 5 square yards.”

Are you confident that your content doesn’t contain any ‘speed bumps’?

If you’ve seen a good one lately please fell free to share it with us.​
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Roisin
3/26/2016 04:48:00 am

“We will provide you with excellent service provision”. Nice!

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