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	<title>Comments on: Editing Gone Wild</title>
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		<title>By: Lesa C</title>
		<link>http://www.theproposalguys.com/2008/02/04/editing-gone-wild/comment-page-1/#comment-1459</link>
		<dc:creator>Lesa C</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Feb 2008 21:10:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Agreed! And to Barbara&#039;s point, why don&#039;t they enlist the expertise of their RFP response departments to help them write better RFPs?!?! This is a nugget of advice I also included in my recent panellista response that should be posted soon.  : )</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Agreed! And to Barbara&#8217;s point, why don&#8217;t they enlist the expertise of their RFP response departments to help them write better RFPs?!?! This is a nugget of advice I also included in my recent panellista response that should be posted soon.  : )</p>
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		<title>By: Roisin</title>
		<link>http://www.theproposalguys.com/2008/02/04/editing-gone-wild/comment-page-1/#comment-1370</link>
		<dc:creator>Roisin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Feb 2008 15:51:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have done this on more than one occassion. One particularly long and hard day, I only discovered the glaring error of my ways after a half hour of searching through previous versions of my matrices for the culprit, convinced I had dropped a line.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have done this on more than one occassion. One particularly long and hard day, I only discovered the glaring error of my ways after a half hour of searching through previous versions of my matrices for the culprit, convinced I had dropped a line.</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara Esmedina</title>
		<link>http://www.theproposalguys.com/2008/02/04/editing-gone-wild/comment-page-1/#comment-1357</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Esmedina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Feb 2008 15:58:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hah! Too funny. I am sure many of us have WANTED to rewrite the RFPs we receive. I have noticed that some large companies with top-notch RFP response departments put out some of the worst RFPs. I always wonder why they don&#039;t hire the same caliber of talent to write their RFPs as they do to respond to outside RFPs. Don&#039;t they realize they are sending this abominable document to an elite group of writing and grammar snobs within the companies they want to do business with?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hah! Too funny. I am sure many of us have WANTED to rewrite the RFPs we receive. I have noticed that some large companies with top-notch RFP response departments put out some of the worst RFPs. I always wonder why they don&#8217;t hire the same caliber of talent to write their RFPs as they do to respond to outside RFPs. Don&#8217;t they realize they are sending this abominable document to an elite group of writing and grammar snobs within the companies they want to do business with?</p>
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