THE PROPOSAL GUYS
Jon and BJ's Proposal Blog
Friday, October 5, 2007
I came upon the following two ‘speed bumps’ in proposals recently. They literally stopped me in my tracks (reading wise).
“…the price of this is priceless.”
“…the diameter of which is 5 square yards.”
Are you confident that your content doesn’t contain any ‘speed bumps’?
If you’ve seen a good one lately please fell free to share it with us.
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