Build it like Beckham

Posted by Jon under Musings | Add your comment

A lovely story in The Guardian newspaper this morning – and if BJ’s allowed a baseball analogy, no-one’s going to stop me quoting a soccer story that sparked some proposal-related thoughts.

Bill Beswick, a sports pyschologist, was brought in to work with Manchester United when their star player was David Beckham.

Before training one morning, he tried to motivate United’s players by telling them a tale of three bricklayers. Asked what he was doing, the first replied “laying bricks” and the second said “earning £10 an hour” but the third said he was “helping to build a beautiful cathedral where I will bring my kids”.

Apparently Beckham promptly scored a wonderful goal on the practice pitch and celebrated by screaming: “Cathedral 1 Bricklayers 0.”

Makes me wonder what proposal managers are doing each day. Are we “getting a document out of the door”; are we “paying the mortgage”, or are we “telling the stories that bring in business and keep our co-workers employed”?

Writing: Secrets of Success

Posted by Jon under Processes & best practice | Add your comment

A common query came up again on a recent course for the proposal team of an asset management company: “So how do we make sure our proposal content is first-class?”

This would be my “wish list”:

  • A house style guide for proposals, written in an entertaining and accessible way, giving all contributors pointers on how to develop good content
  • Training for all contributors. I said “all”. Not just the proposal team. Training serves two purposes – it helps people to improve their content, and also takes away some of the ‘fear factor’ they face when working on proposals.
  • Great pre-written proposal content. Write it once, to the highest standards; keep it up to date; make sure everyone who needs it has access to the material, using a professional tool (Pragmatech, for example)
  • Clear briefing of all contributors. Make sure they have appropriate detail on the context for this proposal, the themes you’re trying to put across, the messages you’d like them to cover in this particular answer, the expected length of the answer you’d like back. (Ideally, make sure that – if they’re contributing lots of content – they’re involved in the strategy and storyboarding sessions!). And give them plenty of time and advance notice!
  • Professional editing by the proposal centre. You’ll never ensure absolute consistency of voice throughout the document if you’re collating information written by individuals with different writing styles and abilities. That’s where great proposal writers come in.